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Haiku Happiness Journals

Posted by on September 27, 2016

In a conversation with my granddaughter, Peyton, a while back, she confided in me that she is keeping a journal.  She also told me that sometimes she writes her entries in haiku poetry form*.  What a cool idea!

Fast forward to a few weeks ago when I was browsing a bookstore for a gift for my daughter’s birthday.  I found a really cool three year journal that only has three small lines for each day.  The idea is to journal one happy thing a day. Having attempted journaling myself with no long-term success, I had the brainstorm that the happy thing could be in haiku form.  So I bought two, one journal for me and one for Hillary (my daughter, of course!).  Then, after she’d opened her gift, I challenged her to write in haiku and then we’d share.

What a fun time this is becoming.  Once a week we’ve been texting our week’s worth of haiku to each other.  It’s a fun way to connect despite busy schedules (she’s a college prof and a home-schooling mom!).  Haiku are succinct and get to the heart of the matter. They are beautifully simple.   Since we started, I find myself thinking in syllable counts and I am more aware of the details of the tiny joys of each day.

Me – September 13:                                                               September 24:

Overcast and rain                                                                Hidden path revealed

Grey subduing any warmth                                            Overgrown by time and vines

The furnace is on!                                                                 Order is restored.

 

Hillary- September 24:                                                       September 18:

Saturday dawn breaks                                                       What to do today?

Suits, goggles, towels,and caps                                       Make breakfast and read a book

Watch my fast girls swim.                                                 Sounds just right to me.

 

Peyton:

The windows shatter

The bright light is shining through

Oh dear, where are you?

 

  • I know you know this – but a haiku is a Japanese poetry form that doesn’t use rhyme, but syllable counts instead.  A haiku has three lines only.  The first has 5 syllables, the second has 7,  and the third has 5.  Traditionally haiku are about nature and have some sort of surprise in the last line.

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